and life changes in an instant
in a fleeting moment
you just might find out
who you can trust
and who you cant
who your real friends are
and who they arent
and whether you will ever
be the same
again.
1 year ago
Monday, March 28, 2011
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I think you must be a good friend...
Those are very true words. I'm sorry if you're still having difficulties with your friends. Thinking of you:)
thanks guys.
becca, this one isnt about me....
my friend troubles are seeming to get better..
I'm glad your troubles are getting easier:)
ooooh those words are veryy beautiful :)
Oh that's so true and your words are weaved together as nicely as the hands of the maker of a scarf. I hope your friend has been warmed up by your words.
=)
thanks, sharon.
speedwing: why thank you. and i would tell you if he was warmed by the words, except....... except i didnt exactly show him/tell him...
bless you.
prayers.
join us if you wish.
disconnect for a while might help.
awesome reflection,
keep it up.
It does change in an instant.
Hope things work out. : )
poignant ! everyone has friends like this at some point but we usually learn from them ..well done
So true-it takes a bad day to really discover true friends.
I love the rhythm of this poem. :o)
I love the rhythm of this poem. :o)
Very thoughtful.
Simple and thought provoking...
wise words ...
I like this - well done
Such true words. thank you for sharing!!
Such true words. thank you for sharing!!
Love this! I have found those words to be true so many times....it makes me sad that those words have to be true.
Aye, and sometimes you wish you never found out at all.
This is a great poem. heartfelt and true.
It's frightening to think how things can drastically change in a brief moment...a great, thoughtful little piece!
beautiful..and the constant shift is the game of life for us to embrace!
OMG! you don't know how much of a pleasure it is to read these words because this is what i'm going through right now...a "shift". (poetic snap) you're speaking the truth.
As the Cowardly Lion said, "Ain't it the truth!"
Just was I needed today, thank you very much!
oh yes, all it takes is a moment!
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I think there comes a time when we find out who are the fair-weather friends and who are the real ones. True words, enjoyed reading, thanks :)
I know this feeling all too well
You put your feelings out their. It helps to write about it and you do this clearly. Good post.
jingle, thanks.
thingy, it does, it really does.
kez: thanks. and yeah, we surely learn from them.
butterfiles: yep, it does.
thank you, absolutepalaver and tarang and walker 287 and beccagivens and dthaase and althea and verbality and lunawitch and satans hotel and neha and ncmeri
me of course, it is, it really is. at least i think so.
sober on the way to sane: anytime =) im glad to know i contributed to your day =))
vinay: yes, it does
mypastmademe: yes, i think so. and thank you =)
scarlett: i know right =/
irisinbloom: thank you. and it isnt easy throwing your feelings out there for everyone to scrutinize..
I like this - well done
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