Wednesday, September 21, 2011

but you see

when we're really busy
- way too busy -
with life;
living life, catching life,
being what life needs us to be,

we stop.

and look around.
and realize

that maybe this isnt
what ive always wanted

(even though it is)
but maybe it isnt.

and then we look around
i look around

and realize
maybe, just maybe
that what i want most in this world

is difficult,
but not impossible,
to obtain.

that if i really, really, really
want to do something,
i should.
no matter what it costs me.

even if it means
with a lot of obstacles
with some disapproval
with my weaknesses

what if its worth it,
in the end?


Arjit Srivastava said...

:) That was so nicely written. Perhaps, we do miss out on so many things. We are always confused, and lost between what we want, what we get, and what we need.

Anonymous said...

oh wow! Beautifully written.
Life is short...we are young. Let's act young and try out as many things as possible.

Yes. I ride my bike everywhere. I love her so much!


anjum artwriter said...

Great expression leading the reader on with the doubtful feelings and a state of indecision.Lovely to read and was worth it in the end.

Lu Ann said...

Your post touched me, more than you know. Ive been dealing with a very simmilar thought.

"and realize

that maybe this isnt
what ive always wanted

(even though it is)
but maybe it isnt."

What if it is worth it? Well, I think we should just leap and trust... if it wasnt worth it, then we´ll always be able to pray we can come back to what we had.

The Orange Tree said...

very thought provoking.

Thanks for sharing.

The Cello Strings said...

moving words, well penned.


Melle said...

Carpe diem - always a timely reminder! here's my offering this week:

kez said...

Lovely and great message loved it thank you

p.s not a critism but I found the font rather small or I may just be as blind as a bat !

dhitzunako said...

Hi! Glad to see that you join the rally again. :)
The poem flows naturally, with well spacing between stanzas. Great job. b^.^d

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A wonderful and thought-provoking write. Well done!

Lena said...

The words I need most to concentrate on are 'go for it!'....and y'know what? You may well have just convinced me!

The Poetry Palace said...

best regards, you expressed your message eloquently.

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